Electric
Some months back, on a Sunday morning, my dog added his outdoor voice to those of my bickering kids and told me something was wrong. I stomped downstairs, unlocked the back door, and became aware of a chittering between Pip’s excited barks. I have tried to render the story of what followed in a poem, because the encounter seemed to me to merit poetic language, a fitting ode to an experience that made me smile the rest of the day. But, as usual, I feel my efforts are poor and do not do my subject justice. In any case, I hope at least to have conveyed my delight in this feistiest of creatures!
Electric
You were trapped
A metal grate on one side
My eager terrier on the other.
Denser than the darkness,
I could not make you out,
But sensed you were something rare.
I called the kids, locked in the dog
Excitement made me shout.
We waited, camera ready.
You emerged, unbowed
A slender, whiskered sprite
A morsel of ferocious energy.
I held my breath
And captured you.
I have the photo still.
Bright chest, white sideburns
Your black eyes fizzed and sparked
With concentrated life.
Head high, you slipped into the grass
A liquid, lissom, dark-tipped length.
The air around you crackled.
We watched you bound away,
Light and lovely as thistle down
A wraith of smoke, a shared memory.